First thing I would probably do is give the post a title and description so if someone doesn't already know they are looking at a student animation exercise they can figure it out and maybe offer feedback. That said, this looks pretty good. I would consider having more anticipation on the bone grab (raising his arm more and then a quick swing and grab). The bone also seems to pop a bit when he picks it up. The follow through on the throw looks all right to me, but could be a bit more exaggerated. His walk seems a bit stiff especially at the last frame (looks like he is leaning too far forward and is out of balance. On the whole this is a pretty ambitious little piece of animation and could be really great with a little more polish.
Hey Thad,
ReplyDeleteFirst thing I would probably do is give the post a title and description so if someone doesn't already know they are looking at a student animation exercise they can figure it out and maybe offer feedback. That said, this looks pretty good. I would consider having more anticipation on the bone grab (raising his arm more and then a quick swing and grab). The bone also seems to pop a bit when he picks it up. The follow through on the throw looks all right to me, but could be a bit more exaggerated. His walk seems a bit stiff especially at the last frame (looks like he is leaning too far forward and is out of balance. On the whole this is a pretty ambitious little piece of animation and could be really great with a little more polish.
Keep up the good work,
Justin